This is a classic case of concept failing to meet expectations. I readily admit that the piece doesn't deserve to win. There just isn't enough story. That said, I still love the concept.
I want to show to simultaneous scenes. A parallel story if you will.
I will revisit this one, I'm sure. I also have to tighten up some of the technical details (thanks to a certain friend for the consult).
Anyway, here's my entry.
I'll post the winner soon.
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