This is a classic case of concept failing to meet expectations. I readily admit that the piece doesn't deserve to win. There just isn't enough story. That said, I still love the concept.
I want to show to simultaneous scenes. A parallel story if you will.
I will revisit this one, I'm sure. I also have to tighten up some of the technical details (thanks to a certain friend for the consult).
Anyway, here's my entry.
I'll post the winner soon.
This site is a chronicle of my adventures in the world of writing competitions. I'll share my entries to various writing contests, poetry contests, and everything in between. I'll review writing contest websites, interview writing competition winners, share tips and tricks, and reflect on the lessons I learn along the way.
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