Wednesday, December 1, 2010

On the Premises Mini Contest 13 - Ending

Here the writing contest challenge and winners.

We were supposed to write bad endings. My entry, upon review might actually not be a bad ending, and also might actually may be more of a beginning.

Blueberry sludge bled down Kelly’s wrist.  She cursed the pie; the pie that would never reach Gina’s heart, the pie that would have revoked Diane’s historic playground triumph under the plastic slide that smelled like urine, the pie that would have made her the top bitch.  She left the mess, and exited the kitchen.

“Hey shugah,” Linda twanged, brushing shoulders with Kelly in the doorway.

Kelly stopped. Strawberry rhubarb, she thought, could work for Linda. 

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